Unspeakable

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Sunday, 10-Jul-2005 6:46:52

Passion roaring from one hot mouth to another kissing softly on her shoulder. He holds her and makes her feel confotable. She glances up at hime curiously wondering his next move. Will he do what she wants him too. Will he spoil the mood. Dancing with her on this feeling of passion making every move count. Then she stops everything is still. and she said "don't think about what your doing follow what your instincts tell you" she clobbered him and began vigeroulsy kissing him he was stuned to find that the elegant lady he went out to dinner with is now filling in his most desprated desires. and that is how you know that not only will the anticipation of come along but the love will continue for many times to come.

Let me know what you think please

Post 2 by BB (move over school!) on Sunday, 10-Jul-2005 6:50:17

Well Jen I am not much of a writer type person but this was good.

Post 3 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 10-Jul-2005 11:20:28

Wow I really, really like this.

Post 4 by Jess227 on Sunday, 10-Jul-2005 17:06:28

That is good... For fiction that is. There's a website where you can post all of your works on. And it's fairly accessible. I only know this website bc a friend of mine uses it to post all of her fiction. And best of all people can leave reviews. FiCPress website: http://www.fictionpress.com/

Post 5 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Monday, 11-Jul-2005 2:31:58

Ah cool might check this out, thanks!!

Post 6 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Wednesday, 13-Jul-2005 17:56:43

intament hu

Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Thursday, 14-Jul-2005 8:06:09

Um what did you mean by that?

Post 8 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Thursday, 14-Jul-2005 22:45:13

I meant that it was very sexual

Post 9 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Friday, 15-Jul-2005 5:30:38

Ah well ... that's okay.

Post 10 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 4:28:38

interesting jen. I really like it.

Post 11 by Aragorn (Veteran Zoner) on Monday, 18-Jul-2005 14:33:25

My reply to that is this:

As they lie together, anticipating, wondering, he begins to caress her ever so gently. As he caresses her, she begins to softly moan with passion, ever so softly. As his fingertips begin to slowly and lovingly drift from her neck, downwards, she begins to call his name, and then arch her back with much anticipation of what might be next for her and her lover.

Post 12 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Monday, 18-Jul-2005 14:37:23

wow that was good aragon

Post 13 by Aragorn (Veteran Zoner) on Monday, 18-Jul-2005 16:30:12

That wasn't one of my best, trust me.